I’ve lived one thousand lives before, perhapsand yes, I have no memory of them —I must have committed dire mishapsto live a life so often hurt, condemned;I watch the souls ...

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I very much like the rhythm of this poem, it reminds me much of the classic poetry that I first read when I was younger. The only issue that I think I find with this piece is that the end seems to be missing the punch that would drive this poem home. It also seemed to lose a bit of its rhythm at the end which was a detracting factor; but, all in all, this was good work that I enjoyed reading!


A practice in intimacy.

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In many minds I view mankind but only that would seem quite dull if I could learn from nothing else there wouldn't be that much to know.   The way ...

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