comments for Last Run Before Ice Over
  • 4 years, 6 months ago
    Thanks for the comment! I've thought about that, how all my writing is terse, concise. But it reflects my general tendency to, as Thoreau put it, "simplify, simplify." I'm a software writer by trade and distilling code is something we do.
    by bobcourchaine
  • 4 years, 6 months ago
    I wish more of a story was in this poem or maybe a different poem that includes more of the story. I do love small poems but sometimes there's not enough for the "indifferent reader" to latch onto, leaving us wanting more.
    by lookingforwisdom