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i'll tell you what i want

what i really, really really want
is for you to say, "yeah, sure,

i'll buy the book when you
put it together finally, no matter
what the quality, and furthermore,
i love you."

and then do all those things. 

that would make my fucking life.

Overall

Ok, I'm not really good at giving reviews. But since a simple ' I liked it.' or ' I loved it.' doesn't count enough words to actually submit a review I'll give it a shot.
So sorry for  blabbering around.

Uhm...I liked the poem. It's very easy to relate with.
It's clear what message you want to send with it.

Like I said, I'm not really good at this. So i'm going to stop here. :)
Hope you got something out of it :)