Ok, I'm not really good at giving reviews. But since a simple ' I liked it.' or ' I loved it.' doesn't count enough words to actually submit a review I'll give it a shot.
So sorry for blabbering around.
Uhm...I liked the poem. It's very easy to relate with.
It's clear what message you want to send with it.
Like I said, I'm not really good at this. So i'm going to stop here. :)
Hope you got something out of it :)