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the good fight

 

people fight

for their ideas,

for their values,

for their honor,

for their families,

and for their nations.

 

others also fight;

but, they fight

for their next breath.

Overall



Short, powerful, to the point. A very good inspirational poem. I wish you would have expanded the second stanza to include a little more details into fighting for your breath.. If you could expand it, making it more detailed but still keep the simple power of it, I think it would be perfect. I really enjoyed the piece though, remember, beauty is in the eye of the beholder! Keep writing- Isaac